tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post5425870840500235867..comments2023-10-11T05:23:33.173-05:00Comments on Dennis - The King of Nothing: Poetry Thursday: If These Walls Could Talk . . .Dennishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15917954423962512385noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-26679272798109728392006-12-02T08:34:00.000-05:002006-12-02T08:34:00.000-05:00Well, hmmm. Now I feel as though your compliment ...Well, hmmm. Now I feel as though your compliment really means something. This is stellar work, my new friend. The language, the passion, the power. I got goosebumps reading it. Doesn't happen often. Thanks for a delicious morning. I hope it's a good day for both of us.fuquinayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05996168855030440765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-5404684074867823422006-12-01T23:52:00.000-05:002006-12-01T23:52:00.000-05:00You have written an anthem for spiritual reclamati...You have written an anthem for spiritual reclamation.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-78769622011317127672006-12-01T23:00:00.000-05:002006-12-01T23:00:00.000-05:00Your poem was very alive...it made me glad walls c...Your poem was very alive...it made me glad walls couldn't talk--all of the angst and suffering they bear witness to. By the end, you turned the energy of it and made me change my mind. I read it several times, appreciating the line...Left-handed Trees...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06057727021295729384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-36476844996657909292006-12-01T18:12:00.000-05:002006-12-01T18:12:00.000-05:00Wonderful insight.Wonderful insight.Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00115424986419148588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-73161440692131772272006-12-01T15:03:00.000-05:002006-12-01T15:03:00.000-05:00What a wonderful poem!! I have decided that your c...What a wonderful poem!! I have decided that your consistancy in writing great pieces of poetry requires me to permanently link you from my site. :-)GTShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00004117992780647943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-17505656973344734032006-12-01T14:45:00.000-05:002006-12-01T14:45:00.000-05:00Wow, Dennis, i feel your frustration strongly thro...Wow, Dennis, i feel your frustration strongly through your words. In time, though, it's true, things will make more sense. We have to evolve and change, and sometimes things have to be left behind. I so feel the same about my own job, it's unreal. Everyday it traps me, and i know that it feels like your pushing against a wall the whole time... But writing does help to alleviate these feelings. So keep going. Lots of love Dennis xxNataliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07015229233363963005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-5838501382173191312006-12-01T09:36:00.000-05:002006-12-01T09:36:00.000-05:00Thanks everyone for visiting and reading my poem a...Thanks everyone for visiting and reading my poem and for leaving your thoughts. As always, its most appreciated. Criticism is also always welcome – it helps us to grow as poets!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-37652503359221350962006-12-01T01:01:00.000-05:002006-12-01T01:01:00.000-05:00oops..sorry Dennis..I hit the button before I was ...oops..sorry Dennis..I hit the button before I was finished..I just wanted to say that I always enjoy coming to read your words..I really like how you write nd express your self..thanks..mmaddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18395866352091522129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-1206308081782150862006-12-01T00:58:00.000-05:002006-12-01T00:58:00.000-05:00yes much revealed..read again and see the life ca...yes much revealed..read again and see the life calling to you..and go live it to your fullest..not it's as yours will be so much richer for it, as it will be you will leading your life and not it leading youmaddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18395866352091522129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-61290537192819151462006-11-30T19:44:00.000-05:002006-11-30T19:44:00.000-05:00Dennis, your beautiful poem talks to me of desolat...Dennis, your beautiful poem talks to me of desolation, desperation, hopelessness and all of a sudden the light comes, and then there is resurrection.<br />Beautifully composed. Carefully & then thoughtfully too.<br />Sorry about your job. I know that wretched feeling. But who knows what waits round the corner. Let your heart lead you to your loves.<br />And I sure love the picture you've posted with this poem.Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.ukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08818807164881810296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-26480700514543885742006-11-30T14:06:00.000-05:002006-11-30T14:06:00.000-05:00Well, thank goodness for your meantimes because th...Well, thank goodness for your meantimes because this is worth it - from an observers point of view, at any rate.ren powell https://www.blogger.com/profile/15593358547415514500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-39303034799149460192006-11-30T13:14:00.000-05:002006-11-30T13:14:00.000-05:00Wow! Such a powerful poem. Well done, you! I can u...Wow! Such a powerful poem. Well done, you! I can understand your frustrations - keep writing them out!paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-16405059763618603482006-11-30T12:50:00.000-05:002006-11-30T12:50:00.000-05:00Dennis: we must be on parallel paths. Feeling stup...Dennis: we must be on parallel paths. Feeling stupid seems to be the outstanding feeling I have these days.<br /><br />On your poem: what a way to take all that, and make it yours. Nice.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04561786891662799199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-79786654312753216452006-11-30T10:43:00.000-05:002006-11-30T10:43:00.000-05:00"A great and urgent cry
would pierce the darkness"..."A great and urgent cry<br />would pierce the darkness"<br /><br />Love that. Thanks for sharing. NicAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-86327138379989478382006-11-30T09:35:00.000-05:002006-11-30T09:35:00.000-05:00It's easy to say, "Be patient. All will be reveale...It's easy to say, "Be patient. All will be revealed in time." But living through it is never easy. I have seen this place you describe so eloquently, and your therapist's words are true, the answers to your questions are forming within you this very moment, like being pregnant with the true You. The waves of labor pain come quicker toward the final birthing, but it's worth it when you look into the face of your own beauty and innocence! Thanks for sharing your struggle with us within this wonderfully crafted poem. I'm honored to read it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-68000077564796080542006-11-30T08:59:00.000-05:002006-11-30T08:59:00.000-05:00Such despair and angst I hear. Patience? All will ...Such despair and angst I hear. Patience? All will be revealed? <br /><br />You poem has revealed much already.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3148147478967571331.post-955919206585184022006-11-29T19:30:00.000-05:002006-11-29T19:30:00.000-05:00Nice take on it. indeed if these walls could talk....Nice take on it. indeed if these walls could talk...<br /><br />...we'd know a lot of things, wouldn't we?<br /><br />Thanks for your encouraging comments on my blog. Cheers.Rethabilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.com